had writer's meeting again for "talent show"

the first couple of things wrote:

1 - a song parody - not 's actual foray - but it worked into what we were THEN doing but now they agreed with that it would be way to complicated to pull off - so we got no finale

2 - gangster kids running a "pay to play" scam on the playgroud. they loved it at first though considered it "a little dark" - will be used sometime in the future maybe

they have been trashed

 

again has to revise a skit so it is "less dark" and fits better in how the show will be staged

and assigned SOMETHING about making a "smart house" - yech stuff knows ZERO about

and - as such - it is kinda difficult to write a satire on a topic you really do not know enough about

but - if wants 's stuff in the show as opposed to the decidedly unfunny stuff

then better write it

 

at least the producer and are on the same page as far as humor is concerned

 

"but what about 's homage to the Marx Brothers?" you ask

thus far it seems to still be making the cut

however they fell in love with the Three Stooges bit provided tonight

 

Three Stooges over the Marx Brothers?

this kinda displays what is dealing with here

 

nothing against the Three Stooges but....come on! really?